Wednesday, September 10, 2008

2 clever by 1/2

i revel in my
cleverness;
wonder why
the crowd
can't understand

now i stand
alone; where's
the crowd?
i don't
understand

3 comments:

Gowri Mohanakrishnan said...

I love the way you've used twos here - first in the title, and then there are two stanzas, and two situations that are opposites of each other. No solutions offered, though - which makes one think.

Anonymous said...

Is one too clever?
Or is even two a crowd?
When with a half-wit.

RAJI MUTHUKRISHNAN said...

Is one the fallout of the other? Or is it a falling out?