beyond 20/20
a little verse on friend ranmal's exhibit,
a pair of spectacles made from bicycle wheels,
in a recent art show ...
out of focus
hocus spokus
circles frame
roundly blame
an ungreen vision
peddle hope
pedaloscope
foot up n down
greenin' the town
a cleaner vision
tis spectacular
a bike-ocular
gandhi glasses
moving masses
the inner vision
a pair of spectacles made from bicycle wheels,
in a recent art show ...
out of focus
hocus spokus
circles frame
roundly blame
an ungreen vision
peddle hope
pedaloscope
foot up n down
greenin' the town
a cleaner vision
tis spectacular
a bike-ocular
gandhi glasses
moving masses
the inner vision
7 comments:
Lennonesque
(It's alright Ma, for those who want it) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2bjqYPH7rAo
It is brilliant! There is the flawed state, the ideal state, and the last verse is about how to get there.
And all in lines of not more than two words each! Almost visionary!
Indeed Bike-ocular!
Very cool Gardenia!
Brilliant piece, Raja - and Gardenia's comment no less
so i am reading it and savouring it the comments as well and am like
wow !
what does
one say
now !!
What I meant to and forgot to say - "Had this been exhibited with the exhibit, it would have won more plaudits."
Now I understand that it actually was....
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